Paper Mario: The Book of Ages

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Okay, where to start.... Right, This is my idea I came up with for a Paper Mario Game. Why is it called "The Book of Ages"? I'll get to that. The story starts out with Mario getting a letter from Princess Peach saying they're going to have a Mario Party at her castle and invited the Mario Bros and all her friends. Mario and Luigi come to the party and everyone is there, including Bowser! They all have a Mario Party fun, but then, A great Magician comes and kidnaps Peach and runs off into the woods. Mario, being the Hero he is, gives chase. Before he knows it, Mario has found him in a new land that is doomed to be struck by a comet in 96 hours. , that the magician, known as The Great Tick-Tocker!, has summoned using Peach's "powers". Mario has to travel the world and find the 7 Instruments of the Night Sky to save the world in only 96 hours, but with the Book of Ages (See, that's why), Mario can turn back the pages of time to keep the world from falling into ruin. So, yeah, that's the jist of it. Yeah, I know it sounds very similar to Majora's Mask, but yeah, I got nothing to say in response to that. It's true. Well, you probably would want to know the names of the characters I made, well.....
Mario's Partners are; going counter-clockwise
Goombert: The Super Nerd Goomba. Uses Tattle.
Boomley: The young perverted Bomb Boo who wishes he had a girlfriend. Uses Bomb
McKenzie: He's Canadian, eh. Uses that Power that Parakary does.
Koopustus: The Gladiator Koopatrol that would dine in hell if he has to. Uses a power similar to Lakilester.
K. Linger: The Kremling secret agent who's a real lady killer. Uses a power that enables you to climb ropes and vines.
Soshi: The Yoshi school girl who's the president and only member of her school's Super Mario Club, . Uses that power like that Yoshi in PM2.
Nina: The proud female ninja Ninji. Very Tsundere. Uses her Ninja powers to make you disapear.
Buzz: The traveling Buzzy Beatle merchant and overprotective father. Uses the power that Koops utilized.
Well, that's all the Partners, now the others.
On the Right:
Peach
Wario and Waluigi -Antagonize Mario similar to Master Troopa Jr. They want the Night Sky instruments for themselves
Bowser - Searches for Mario so he can beat him and rescue Peach for himself, and maybe finally getting a kiss from her!
Dingaling - Grunts that work for The Great Tick-Tocker! Where did they come from I wonder...?
Alph the Spaceman - Alien from space that has some sort of connection to The Great Tick-Tocker!'s past. He's the magician right hand man.
On the Left:
Toad and Toadette - follow Mario to Countdown Town from the Party. They have a little mini-adventure in the Gwah Ha Har Gorge.
Yoshi - also follows Mario to Countdown Town from the Party. He has a little mini-adventure in the Minami Mountains.
DK - also follows Mario to Countdown Town from the Party. He has a little mini-adventure on Ananab Island.
Luigi - also follows Mario to Countdown Town from the Party. Gives Mario advice whenever he's in town. He has a little mini-adventure in the Clockwork Colosseum.
Daisy - also follows Mario to Countdown Town from the Party. She has a little mini-adventure in Goomsdale High School.
Then of course, there is The Great Tick-Tocker! in the Middle.

The rest of the story below.

Prologue-[link]
Chapter 1-[link]
Chapter 2-[link]
Chapter 3-[link]
Chapter 4-[link]
Chapter 5-[link]
Chapter 6-[link]
Chapter 7-[link]
Chapter 8-[link]